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Momma made
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:11:23 AM in AEST
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momma made cold morning
cereal all alone
into bowls my tears were pouring
no angels on the phone
hey yeah, it's just that way
i would make my porridge
for sister brother too
i would wait the morning
til the sky's no longer blue
hey yeah, it's just that way
momma made cold porridge
no milk to water down
no sugar for some pouring
just a spoon to dig the ground.
dw
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Re: Momma made
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:30:25 AM AEST
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Wow Dwayne...I see you had poetic skills even in your youth!! I like the expression in this write, and the sadness is easily felt...Nice job, and thanks for sharing one of your older poems!
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Re: Momma made
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:33:57 AM AEST
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Oops! I meant song...not poem!! LOL
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Re: Momma made
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 07:19:36 PM AEST
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awesome write..terrificaly poetic!
a few refrains and you've a top ten...
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