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I have problems, no one helps me.
Contributed by
Keila
on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:23:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I have problems,
these problems hurt my mind.
the yelling it scares me,
makes me want to cry.
the problem is they do it all the time.
fighting solves my problems,
help to ease my smile
unfortunatly it will only last a wile
a wile for my pain,
the tourture left inside,
it hurts to think and breathe and feel,
if anything is real,
i cry at night,
sitting all alone.
nobody to comfort me, nobody is ever home
I fear the dark that embraces me,
holding me so tight,
this dark that lays me down ,wispering goodnight.
this dark is my hope, my problem, and my cloak.
my mind pounds its problems i want to fight them out,
no one will help me
only a doubt
Copyright ©
Keila
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2005-06-28 22:23:44]
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Re: I have problems, no one helps me.
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:34:29 PM AEST
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Aw, dearest, I'm sure there's someone! If not, you can talk to me about your problems! Don't you have a friend or a relative or something? Or if they're really big problems, you could seek out a counselor. I hope things get better. Nice write!
*Naomi* |
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Re: I have problems, no one helps me.
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 30th June 2005 @ 07:03:40 PM AEST
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This write reached out of my screen and grabbed me by the neck...shook me around a bit and proceeded to throw me to floor..lol
I love it-
what a powerful write..
and please feel free to lean on me anytime ya need someone to talk to...
('bout anything)
awesome write my friend...
Thoughts And prayers To You..
Billy |
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