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Better Off Alone
Contributed by
neoo507
on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 06:15:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You told me you didn't love me
I fell to my knees
It wasn't easy
no one would please me
I'm better off alone
You cried to me on the phone
I listened to your gentle tone
heard you hurt and moan
I wanted to hug you to the bone
I'm better off alone
I must have been a nagging chore
You jumped to the next guy like a whore
If love were a game you'd get a high score
I can't think about you anymore
I'm better off alone
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neoo507
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2005-06-28 18:15:15]
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Re: Better Off Alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Poetic_Influence on
Wednesday, 25th January 2006 @ 02:11:35 PM AEST
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| the problem witht his poem is the rhyme sheme, it rhymes far to much |
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Re: Better Off Alone
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by peaceinfear on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 03:59:03 PM AEST
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| I love the way you write-- its perfect to get your message across.. :) PEace |
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