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The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
Contributed by
GINA
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Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Today they welcome you with a big embrace
Tomorrow they close the door in your face
Now they smile,in seconds they don't
Now they love you,later they won't
Now they're black,when did they turn white?!
You think they kiss you but it's just a bite
Now they talk to you,tomorrow no sound
Now they sing,then they wound
Now they see, suddenly they go blind
What's with you!!what's in your mind?!
Is it raining or their sunny day?
you see no difference anyway
Wondering...thinking..there you stand
Why?What?!you'll never understand
They go around in a rollerskate
Those are the MOODY people i truly hate
Copyright ©
GINA
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by darkkai on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 12:28:47 AM AEST
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| i want to say i'm scared of you but i'm not. i get the poem and it hits too close to home. wish my gun license wasn't suspended. oh well |
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 02:50:06 AM AEST
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| Don't care their whims and fancies..it s a good write and it is lovely. thanks for sharing..Venkat |
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by Delusions on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 05:00:39 AM AEST
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I know these feeling oh too well!!! Its a great write! keep it up!
~Delusions~ |
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by Opium on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 05:48:43 AM AEST
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My arms are wide open
With some words never spoken
You put a big smile on my face
And you do stand in a special place
Black or white it may be flue
But all my kisses are very much true
You judged me too fast
And thought our friendship won't last
I'll tell you what's on my mind right now my friend
I won't let this happen, I won't let our friendship end
It is always raining even when the sun is up in the sky
But you never bother to notice, never bother to ask why
I hide my misery away from you
And when something is black, to you I say it's sky-blue
You see me as a moody person, maybe even a fake
But now I'm on the verge of loosing my best friend for a stupid mistake
Just learn to give as much as you can take
..to love as much as you can hate
To me this whole thing is stupid because I know my intentions
To you it's another friend's deceit and you give it all the attention.
(I ask of you 2 things: your trust and your friendship.
Give me just one, then you'll see I'm innocent) ...PS: read my mail plz and reply |
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by Opium on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 05:55:47 AM AEST
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| ..OH I forgot to comment on your poem ...well it sux if I read it from your mind, but it's a good write on papers |
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 09:29:15 AM AEST
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Ahem....
Tear those binding walls seen down
and let love rest on frienship grounds
may peace and harmony touch your soul
that you should find a way to cope.....
Beautiful write gina.....you keep writing girl and follow your heart, be careful not to make decisions to quickly...and stay safe...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 03:32:07 PM AEST
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| There's more people with open minds and hearts that care,,leave the ignorante ones to them selfs they deserve this you are better than to hate anyone,,I see it in your words you will always be better ,,dont be as them but to be better,,,,spooky |
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by Olddarkme on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 06:52:22 PM AEST
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| I like the poem but I consider myself a moody person so I'm a little insulted. I don't usually do the things that you've written about so maybe your judgement is a little off. |
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by capergirl_23 on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 09:09:01 AM AEST
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Your comment before the poem~IM PRETTY SURE U KNOW THIS KINDA PPLE..Well I can definately relate. I have been on the receiving end of people who seem to love you one minute then push you aside the next. But wanted to thank you for making me aware that it is that same behavior that I put out to people at times myself. Usually the people I care about. It made me look at myself and the way my actions reflect on other people. Sometimes we let our moody behavior hurt the people we love. As the old saying goes ~"We always hurt the ones we love", doesn't make it right. Thank you for making me more aware of what my actions do to those I love. Great poem!!!!! Especially when it can make a person take a harder look at aspects of thier life they have to try to change. Thank you for sharing!
Tracey
Keep Smilin' :)
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by azzouz on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 11:03:34 AM AEST
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bravo gina...
keep up the good work gurl....
you're amazing me with every poeme u write... |
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by the_temptation_of_suicide on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 04:51:37 PM AEST
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this poem is very insulting, narrow minded and selfish in someways.
has it ever crossed your mind that most ppl who r moody have good reason 2 be, that maybe there is a problem,a serious one that they cant share.
im sorry but i really did not like this poem.
think before you right next time.
oh yeh one final thing, do u know what ppl i hate:- narrow minded ones who think that cos i self harm that i am jus attention seeking, im not |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 11:41:50 AM AEST
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| the_temptation_of_suicide ...well what is isulting is your ridiculous comment and by the way, in case you were lost, this is a poetry site not a place where you argue about a subject, I mean look at your silly nick name! ....just commit suicide and let us be, we'd be better off without you hanging around really ...I will write for you a poem if you die :P (a l'un) |
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 05:07:44 PM AEST
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i understood this poem and thought it was quite powerful.
no inter-poet bitching tho! thats not what this site is about. keep writing but keep your comments to yourself if you have nothing good to say! xx |
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 08:40:45 AM AEST
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| Sometimes a poor reflection is due to an imperfect mirror. That doesn't mean I think it was a poor poem. Made me think |
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by wyrd_faerie on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 04:47:41 PM AEST
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| i'm not, i dunno, i'm not gonna sit here and say i like the poem...cos i didn't...i just want to back up what temptation_of_suicide said...i think, just because we're not all happy, it doesn't mean we're bad people...i'm moody but i don't try to be sad...if i could change it all i would...please, don't say things like this poem, it's things like this that hurt us |
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by M on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 11:25:09 AM AEST
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| i'm sorry, but i think that is really out of order. the_temptation_of_suicide was only saying what they thought about your poem, and saying 'just commit suicide and let us be, we'd be better off without you hanging around really' is totaly out of order. maybe you should stop and think about other people before you write stuff like that. us 'moody' people don't try to make you hate us, don't judge us. |
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Re: The PeOPle I H-A-T-E
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 01:32:49 PM AEST
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as a moody , i have to tell u that some of what u said was right, and i didnt know we do hurt pple with our behavior ,we never meant to ..the poem was powerful indeed but not insulting as some poets described it ...i loved it , the subject and the way its written ,mostly the message behind it
10x for sharing it ,never mind about those comments ...
Johnny |
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