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Broken
Contributed by
LoveStruck_Hippie
on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 02:08:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Look into my eyes
and tell me what you see
Can you see my heart breaking
from the things you've said to me
Broken promises and shattered dreams
Lies and half-truths steal love away
A heart bathed in loneliness shivering in the dark
The darkness closing in
A gilmmer of hope begins to fade
The pieces of a broken heart
Scatter helplessly to the wind.
Shannon
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LoveStruck_Hippie
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2005-06-28 14:08:12]
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Re: Broken
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 05:10:23 PM AEST
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Goodness, what an incredible first effort!
Raw, heartfelt, and very well said.
There was a time I could relate.
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Re: Broken
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by freckle on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:36:36 PM AEST
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Good poem. Very vivid images...keep posting!
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Re: Broken
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 10:03:20 AM AEST
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Nice expression in this write...really good wording. I could clearly feel the sorrow in this piece...well done!
Scorp. |
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Re: Broken
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 05:36:11 PM AEST
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| GOD!!! I am so jealous of your ability to write so well! Please keep writing for the benefit of others. |
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Re: Broken
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 8th December 2007 @ 02:53:13 AM AEST
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Beautiful. It was short, but it spoke volumes. The bitter pain was captured so well.
Take care,
David |
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Re: Broken
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th March 2008 @ 07:59:46 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, sad of course, touches the
heart with lost longing. Lovely writting as
always my friend, worth the read . . .
Ben |
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