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When Death Came
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 12:43:33 PM in AEST
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When death came my Nan was scared,
But she was not alone, we were all there,
Holding her hand as she slipped away,
Never again to see the light of day.
She fought death off with all she had,
But her soul was already silently clad,
With an angels heavenly touch,
But Nan wanted to stay with her family so much.
Death wrapped everywhere it was all around,
Nan breathed in her very last sound,
In a blink of an eye she was gone,
In the distance angels began their song.
Her body lay so still, her hands so cold,
Her body looking so worn & old,
We all sat there not knowing what to do,
A sombre mood swept right through.
A chill, we all felt lost in the world,
The damage of death had now unfurled,
A shadow so deadly yet so quiet,
That we would now all sleep with every night.
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pixie
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Re: When Death Came
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by brew on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 12:55:33 PM AEST
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So sorry for the loss, of a great person in your life. I do know and feel your hurt. But always remember she will be in the heart, and mind. Keep the wonderful things you member and go with that. Yes......it takes time, and its alot of hurt...but know she is at peace, now. Beautiful write..........sad as well.
Brew~ |
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Re: When Death Came
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 04:07:34 PM AEST
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| Pixie, beautiful but so sad. You will always carry your Nan with you in your heart, The outer shell has passed on but the innermost will be waiting for you when it is your turn. Try not to grieve too long life still goes on.Hugs from bernard. |
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Re: When Death Came
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 06:37:46 PM AEST
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This is so relatable to recent events i went through with my wife, and her dad's passing, i'm so sorry 4 your loss pix, a beautiful writting in any case as u always give of your self with such deep conviction, and true devotion to poetry, a lovely writting . . .
((((((((pixie))))))))))) Ben |
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Re: When Death Came
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 06:10:08 AM AEST
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im so sorry for your loss hun... even in your pain you've written a most beautiful tribute.... big hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: When Death Came
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 02:07:16 PM AEST
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I am sorry for your lost Krissie.
Hugs if you need to talk i'll be here for you just PM me ok.
love ya |
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Re: When Death Came
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:01:16 AM AEST
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Krissie,
This is such a touching poem. your words always hit that part of my heart that just wants to cry because I can feel every part of you emotions through your words. i hope you are looking after yourself..
much love
genna xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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