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contradictions
Contributed by
viola
on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You keep me sane,
you make me small,
I wanna run,
you make me crawl,
I worship you,
I am forever in awe,
you cherish me
like a whore,
you shadow me
when I am free
and bind my hands
while loving me,
you are my name,
you are my soul,
why cant I leave,
when will I know.
Copyright ©
viola
... [
2003-01-07 23:00:00]
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Re: contradictions
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 11:09:43 PM AEST
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| Fantastic words - I relate so well. Hang in there viola. |
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Re: contradictions
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by Fwog on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 06:28:44 AM AEST
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This is a marvellous write Viola,
love your wording. |
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Re: contradictions
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by Ash on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 12:46:16 PM AEST
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| i can sorelate to this poem, anmd empathise. It really strikes a chord with me and it is beautifully worded. Chin up and keep writing, it will help. |
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