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A terrible Lie
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 11:54:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You look at me
only when I am reacting
to your latest deed
which you promised me
you would do no more.
You are alwys in motion
when I have something to say
nothing's ever your fault
you never really listen
or see I'm in pain
you only want what you want
this relationship is so Insane.
You say you are my friend
but you hurt me again
with the games you play
I sacrifice for you
comfort you when you are blue
and dry your tears away.
I wait for you to look at me
and say something I can believe
I'm starting to think
You'll never find the time
and maybe this love
Is just a terrible lie.
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secretwind
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2005-06-28 11:54:45]
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Re: A terrible Lie
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by brew on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 12:18:05 PM AEST
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Sad, how some can lie to their self.and to others. Why? I do wish I could tell you. This kind of thing, like all you do not need. Move on..........there is so much more out there. Good post...........!
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Re: A terrible Lie
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by bonster on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 03:19:22 PM AEST
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| that was a very honestpoem and just as mixed up as a relationship can get. If this person is real I would say rid them from your lif if you haven't yet believe I have been there and done that and waisted my time trying to make things work and ended up hurt |
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Re: A terrible Lie
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by forsaken_soul33 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 04:30:55 PM AEST
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| good poem, as mean as this sounds it's true. I think that you sholud leave this person. No one deserves to be toyed with. I hope that you find happines with somone else. |
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