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The Fairy Wedding
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 02:12:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Standing on soft petals white
Fairy queen and fairy knight
Pixies in waiting, footman elves
Guarding the couple on waterfall shelves
Under a bulrush, hand in hand
Lovers, together, in fairyland
Fairy godmother, hovers near
Bubbling stream, so cool, so clear
Magical castle in the air
Waiting for the happy pair
Starbursts send them on their way
For it is their wedding day
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gwenevere
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2005-06-28 02:12:17]
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Re: The Fairy Wedding
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 07:06:29 AM AEST
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| Well done Gwenevere this is absolutely lovely Shor but very sweet. smiles from bernard. |
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Re: The Fairy Wedding
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:24:26 AM AEST
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i agree with bernar...short but sweet.
the brevity in no way alters the beauty.
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Re: The Fairy Wedding
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by Winterland on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:44:54 AM AEST
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Yes, short, but the fairytale picture comes through loud and clear. Very nicely done!
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Re: The Fairy Wedding
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by Arannon on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 09:53:08 AM AEST
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| Awww. It is nice and sweet. Although a little idealistic, it fits those lovely pictures of Cicely Barker. |
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Re: The Fairy Wedding
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:32:43 PM AEST
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splendid Ros..
an ode to beauty in yet, another chapter
of the fairytale that is you-
your rhyming scheme has got a composure and coolness
that is so nonchalant..
such an even flow..
I loved it.
B |
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Re: The Fairy Wedding
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:46:31 AM AEST
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This is really graceful. I really liked this and you did a great job...
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