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Still Waiting
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 01:47:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Alone I sit,
Again,
As you've seen before,
Benieth the glowing moon,
Trapped within the heavens.
Watching,
Waiting,
Wondering,
When will you seek me?
I will not hide.
Silently I sit,
Again,
Just as you know it,
Against the ruby sun,
Rising from the hazy mountains,
Falling into the endless sea.
Wishing,
Waiting,
Wanting,
A perfection consumed by imperfections.
A dream abolished by nightmares.
Painfully I sit,
Again,
And you will not care,
As the scornful sun,
And the mournful moon,
Trade places,
Again,
And Again.
But I still remain,
Waiting....
And I'm crying,
Again,
While you watch me again,
Because I am just so sorry....
I cannot wait forever.
Copyright ©
Jane_Doe
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2005-06-28 01:47:26]
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Re: Still Waiting
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by KantKureLyfe on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 06:48:14 AM AEST
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| I loved this for the pure fact that its exactly how I feel about my ex-girlfriend. I'm sure others could relate to it to. |
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Re: Still Waiting
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:19:36 AM AEST
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| very sad and heartfelt... i love the imagery of the sun and moon trading places over and over again. good write. dw |
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Re: Still Waiting
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by gwenevere on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 02:40:17 PM AEST
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| A poem of sadness and pain.don't wait forever, there's alot of living to do out there, Ros |
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Re: Still Waiting
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:37:36 PM AEST
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Sad but greatt poem. No one can wait forever... so this is the truth...
Jodi |
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