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''WORDS'' on Love
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 11:52:06 PM in AEST
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The day moves silent as the night,
and noiseless grows the flower..
an Angel moves on wings of light
as voiceless as the hour.
The moon speaks not a word when she
shines through the Heavens bare..
The stars forever silent.. free-
within the songless air.
The deepest love is voiceless too..
for all it's stock and store-
Yet words on love will always be...
for song or a soliloquy,
held fast for an eternity
and shall be evermore.
M.O.H.
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 12:07:48 AM AEST
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great poem.
i especially like the composition of the last stanza.
"the deepest love is voiceless" - for actions do speak louder than words.
wizard |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 12:16:31 AM AEST
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Very beautifull.
huggs,
emy
Sso true. |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by Shorty_88 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 03:37:23 AM AEST
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I absolutely think this is one of the best i have ever read. I love how you used conparisons like sun-moon, night-day ,and your stanzas are great. People could learn alot from your style of writing. I look foward to reading more from you as your work is a pleasure to read.
Kind Regards, Tara |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by brew on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:54:54 AM AEST
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Great, anology. Seems, you have that "special" word, thought, and feeling. Wrote, with knowing. Thanks, for the post.
Brew~ |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:50:13 AM AEST
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Well done...I like that ever present imagery in your writes. This is my fave line; "The stars forever silent...free-- within the songless air..."
Scorp. |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:54:26 AM AEST
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very, very well written. i applaud your form, imagery and rhyme.. keep up the awesome work.
I especially like " an angel moves on wings of light" very strong visuals on that line.
thanks for sharing
dw |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 05:18:53 PM AEST
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| A beautiful touching piece of poetry written by an outstanding poet. Your work is truly amazing. Keep it up. |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 06:53:03 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem of dreamlike quality, airy
and delicate, nicely done bill . . .
Ben |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 11:03:48 PM AEST
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Wow... this is amazing.... great imagery here..
Wonderful job!!
Jenni |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 05:36:45 AM AEST
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well woven words, truely beautiful.... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by nanb294eva on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 05:25:14 PM AEST
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great poem
that's one i would love to hear you read to me
and may our love last to an eternity
xoxo nancy |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:28:55 PM AEST
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Great comparisons... and you have great imagery from it too. Nice poem...
Jodi |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 10:20:21 PM AEST
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Beautifully written.
Captivating words on love. Lovely insight. |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 11:12:25 AM AEST
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this poem really spoke to unlike any words have before. it is the best i have ever read and i think it will be the best i read for a long time....
you truly are talented
love
Genna |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:46:07 PM AEST
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Your words are captivating, simply beautiful.
But try as we might, words will never come
close to being able to describe love. We can
dress them up in various forms, and make
them sound as eloquent and desirable as
possible, but love always transcends the
confinements of the human tongue.
Excellent write. |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 12:24:20 AM AEST
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Love drives your pen well, I think. It has inspired you in a grand way.
There were so many lines here that I wish I'd written. I loved it.
Take care.
David |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:40:25 AM AEST
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I believe it is I who am as silent as the night....
I am rendered speechless. Beautiful words from a beautiful
poet. Ben is right. This is almost dreamlike, yet touchingly
real. A delight to read, Billy.
yours,
~Breezy |
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Re: ''WORDS'' on Love
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by nanb294eva on
Sunday, 10th June 2007 @ 04:11:44 PM AEST
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great poem
that's one i would love to hear you read to me
and may our love last to an eternity
xoxo nancy
for song or a soliloquy,
held fast for an eternity
and shall be evermore
SOMETIMES I WONDER IF YOU SET IT FREE IT COMES BACK IT YOURS FOREVER
ONLY WHEN I LOOK OUT TO THE MOON
YOU KNOW WHAT I AM TALKING ABOUT |
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