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Hold me
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 10:33:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Hold me In the hole
Of a black night
How fine our bodies fill
the time
without will and without rhyme
ride the silence
to my ears
no more light
but no more fear.....
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2005-06-27 22:33:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hold me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Shorty_88 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 03:45:00 AM AEST (User
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I thought your poem was very good and i could definately find alot of meaning in it. Just remember, poems don't have to be big, to get the point across.
Kind regards and keep up the fantastic work
Tara |
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