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Save The Last Dance For Me
Contributed by
Willofree
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Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 08:06:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I watched you across the expanse of the room
You would whirl and flow to the melodious tune
So delicate and graceful I hoped you'd never stop
An experience of beauty and grace, like a spinning top
Completely spellbound by your beauty and charm
So many partners had embraced you in their arms
A smile on your face, laughter as you spun in the air
Radiating loveliness about you everywhere
Too shy to inquire a dance myself
Yet I wished it was I preferable to anyone else
My heart was beating fast as a drum
As the musicians neared the completion of this rendition
Now I knew it was my final chance
Because the band was playing the last dance
You walked slowly towards me and panic welled up within
I was so shy and overwhelmed, I could only grin
She knew, of course, that I had been watching her
With a smile and gesture she reached, please sir
As she softly spoke, I saved the last dance for you
Without uttering a word, we became two
Years later whenever they play our song
We drop what we are doing to dance along
Our hearts still fill with love and joy
As we move in unison, our love to enjoy
Copyright ©
Willofree
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Re: Save The Last Dance For Me
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by grin69 on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 08:23:52 PM AEST
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| Hello. This is so dreamy and romantic. Wow! I think I'll stop reading all these romance novels and just read your poetry. I absolutely loved it. |
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Re: Save The Last Dance For Me
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 08:37:58 PM AEST
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Flowery prose you say? I dissagree...there is always such honesty of emotion in your writing...such simplicity. What you have written here are the words of your heart and no one can ask for more from a poet.
Very well done my friend
Barkeep!!
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Re: Save The Last Dance For Me
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 08:49:59 PM AEST
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Beautiful is about the only word i can use to compare this to, awesome job
~Clark |
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Re: Save The Last Dance For Me
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 09:49:49 PM AEST
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WOW. How perfectly poetic....Very romantic...I hope this is a true story! *sigh* Nice job!!
Scorp. |
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Re: Save The Last Dance For Me
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by emystar on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 10:39:48 PM AEST
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Very touching, beautifull, sweet write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Save The Last Dance For Me
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by CarolinaBlue on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 10:59:23 PM AEST
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A truly inspirational story. Beautifully written
too! ~Robyn |
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Re: Save The Last Dance For Me
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 08:32:03 AM AEST
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This poem is stunning. I felt like I had slipped backwards into time. Like being in a ballroom, waltzing.
Very impressive and eloquently written as well.
Kie |
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Re: Save The Last Dance For Me
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:17:40 AM AEST
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| Aaaaahhhhh the favorite song that two lovers share. Terry this poem is so very beautiful. A dance with your love is so romantic. Two people together in rhythm with each other. Thanks for sharing this with us. Much peace. Laura |
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Re: Save The Last Dance For Me
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by boobiepeach on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 12:03:30 PM AEST
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very nice i must say. i miss feeling like that. it is great to see some uplifting poems here. i must admit mine are not but this is nice. and please save a dance for me.
peach |
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Re: Save The Last Dance For Me
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 02:46:47 PM AEST
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Sighs deamily.....and goes to play her fav song...
Thanks for sharing this...
Jenni |
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