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Tomorrow
Contributed by
jen54
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Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 11:57:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Tomorrow is almost here
The clook is reading so close
knowing the sun will shine again
and relizing I will not see it
I am stuck inside this house
Left to wonder whats to come
Locked inside this darkend fate
Wishing one day the key will fit
Tomorrow is almost here again
the clock reading so close
I know the sun will shine again
and I will never see it
Copyright ©
jen54
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2005-06-27 11:57:55]
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Re: Tomorrow
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 01:11:08 PM AEST
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| deep and dark. i liked it, it seemed powerful, in a way. great job. keep on writing...i guess 3 in the morning is a good time to get those creative juices flowing for ya. =) |
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Re: Tomorrow
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 09:46:57 PM AEST
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| Powerfully dark & sad. It is a great write! Somewhere the sun will always shine for you. |
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Re: Tomorrow
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 09:52:57 PM AEST
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| Very Deep |
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