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The Return
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 02:03:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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He leans on staff, surveys the land
And knows his boys are close at hand
His heart is bursting out with pride
Oh, to have them by his side
They will be weary, battle torn
But no more lonely and forlorn
Hate and bitternes behind
Only love for them to find
Love of country, very strong
Pride and passion, all belong
Waiting there to right a wrong
Sons and father, what a bond
Love of woman waiting here
Calmly waiting, year on year
Waiting with her arms held wide
For her knight to step inside
Love of child so soft and sweet
Chubby fingers, tiny feet
Laughing, gurgling,safe and warm
Father keeps him safe from harm
Not for him a life of hate
Only joy to participate
All because of knights brave deed
He will always be safe and free
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gwenevere
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Re: The Return
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by bernard on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 03:06:56 AM AEST
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| WOW!!!! what a cyclus of an amazing adventure of the knights of old. This is a story worthier of a much wider audience that the Y.P.D.C I would have this printed it is wonderful. I wish you luck from bernard. |
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Re: The Return
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by R_G_Love on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 07:00:43 AM AEST
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| Nice!!! |
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Re: The Return
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 09:32:07 PM AEST
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*The End.. as I gently place the book back upon the shelf..*
This was an immaculate read through and through..
the imagery was fraught..
your timing, in every line of every verse, was
faultless..
my only hope is that one day..
this takes it rightful place alnog side the select few works of the age..
Well done..
*stands and claps..throws roses...and screams ..
"ENCORE!"*
As Always..
B |
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Re: The Return
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by wizard on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 10:53:21 PM AEST
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i thouroghly enjoyed the entire series. i am a bit saddened to know it is over.
the story was grand,
the rhyming was perfect,
everything was great.
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Re: The Return
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:57:40 AM AEST
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I love how you went from the fathers and sons comparison to the mother and love to the children and laughing. That made the poem so great. You are an amazing writer. I will always enjoy your work...
Jodi |
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