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Eternally Blue
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 01:10:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I sit here all alone
Singing endless songs in my room
Tears pouring from my eyes
Knowing it’ll have to end soon
Screaming out all my pain
A stream of unheard noise flows down
This unconscious mind cries
A new misery and hate I've found
I stand here all alone
Angrily strumming on my guitar
Why do I keep running
When I will never get that far
Carrying this burden
My dreams and hopes cannot come true
An immortal angel
I am eternally bruised and blue
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2005-06-27 01:10:32]
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Re: Eternally Blue
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by ABySs on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 01:14:34 AM AEST
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good write very good write nothin
nice imagery nothin more i can say |
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Re: Eternally Blue
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by Shorty_88 on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 01:28:59 AM AEST
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Jennie i think you did a really good job on this poem. everything you wrote gives a very clear picture in my imagination. Keep up the great work and i look foward to reading more poems by you.
Regards, Tara |
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Re: Eternally Blue
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by secretwind on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 11:07:25 AM AEST
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| I like this flow |
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