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Cold Heartbreak

Contributed by c2b6s on Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 12:27:36 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

*I hoped that as the leaves turned butterscotch yellow, candy apple red
I hoped for just and instant, things would go my way instead
I prayed that as the air got cooler, and the leaves began to fall
I prayed I could forget that I ever cared at all

Sadly, although the seasons change
Although there is more frost than dew
One thing never changes
I'm still in love with you
And all the mittens in the world
All of the hats, all of the scarves
They can't warm the empty feeling
No they can't hide a broken heart

I hoped that as I watched bare branches
Emerge from beneath the leaves
I hoped the bitter temperatures
Would cause my tears to freeze
But they still came down like rain
On a bitter winter day

I sat and watched my pain filled snowflakes
Catch the breeze and drift away*

Copyright © c2b6s ... [ 2005-06-27 00:27:36]
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Re: Cold Heartbreak (User Rating: 1 )
by peaceinfear on Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 08:15:01 PM AEST
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Its a very nice poem - very put together compared to some i have read --but alil' fixer uper here and there and your poem will be quoted in a book some day :) peace

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