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Pushing Forward
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 04:17:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Fading fast...my resolve
feeling the tug of a bond dissolve
A successful failure it would seem
searching futilely for self-esteem
Long lost...or perhaps misplaced
trust in love forever defaced
Seven year itch came and went
emotions churning, starting to ferment
Dying slowly...Me
suddenly lonely; yet free!
Bitterness makes one turn within
with this new life, where do I begin?
Sun shining...penetrating rays
step into the future with no delays
Won't look back----not even once
ready to deal with whatever confronts.
Copyright ©
hauntedscorp
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2005-06-26 16:17:12]
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by wizard on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 04:31:05 PM AEST
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letting go and beginning anew never is easy...but perhaps easier than never trying.
excellent write, HS.
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by Zeldianus on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 12:50:57 AM AEST
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magnificent write. i am thrilled at hearing you say these wonderful words!!
Hugs,
Seth |
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 01:37:22 AM AEST
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A poem and yet also a proclamation with a
firm conviction behind it, nicely written very
effective, beautifuly done scorp . . .
Ben |
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by boobiepeach on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 10:45:13 AM AEST
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great write. sad yet hopeful.
"suddenly lonely; yet free!"
i know the feeling!
peach |
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by Willofree on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 10:46:40 AM AEST
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A wonderful message, expressed beautifully in a very unique and effective format. Full of determination and hope.
Well done, Scorp
Will |
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by secretwind on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 11:18:41 AM AEST
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| Excellent |
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 12:01:41 PM AEST
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| well said scorp, hope you find your new begining |
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 12:01:50 PM AEST
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| well said scorp, hope you find your new begining |
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by jyssvw22 on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 12:02:17 PM AEST
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| well said scorp, hope you find your new begining |
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 10:31:35 PM AEST
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the going rate for leaving your demons behind is priceless my friend..
you go Scorp!
very profound.. this write..
*kissin' you on the cheek*
B |
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 04:13:08 PM AEST
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| What a strongly positive piece! It's amazing the kind of things that one can write when looking on the bright side of things, i wish more people wrote about things like this. It was really a sight to see. I like the format of the poem as well, and the rhymes were truly captivating as well. Impressive piece of work here Scorp! Bravo! |
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 12:21:52 PM AEST
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this is excellent, i love how you wrote this:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 01:57:17 PM AEST
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very strong writing and so well spoken too! I especially like the last stanza.. so inspirational and bright!
Thanks much for sharing it!
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 08:16:19 PM AEST
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| Very well written Scorp. Powerfully strong with heartfelt commitment. Love the strong & emotionally positive words "Won't look back----not even once - ready to deal with whatever confronts." Great job! :) |
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by harlot20 on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 02:13:30 PM AEST
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| i like the strength in this poem, life after a relationship, one youve been pulled apart from. and you fell, but you got yourself bak up.....in a way |
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Re: Pushing Forward
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 10:50:15 PM AEST
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| So strong you must be sister. This was a super powerful write. Loved this part "won't look back ---not even once ready to deal with whatever confronts" Got to take it one day at a time. And to quote Papa Jerry~~if you get confused listen to the music play~~Peace to you, Laura |
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