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The Battle
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 03:28:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The cries of anguish hit the air
A sound of horror and despair
Blood soaked bodies lie around
In the trees and on the ground
Scarlet flames lick at the homes
Tortured bodies, shattered bones
Evil cries of hatred, scorn
The devil once again is born
It makes the brave mans blood run cold
Takes him back to days of old
But no more time for looking back
The time has come, attack, attack
He sits astride his gallant horse
Behind, his army, amazing force
Lancelot, brother, by his side
Whom he'd searched for, far and wide
With heads down low, they face the throng
We will win, their battle song
They charge into this place called hell
With flash of sword, all men they fell
Suddenly, an eerie calm
Lancelot and brother, free from harm
You've won my son's,they've paid the price
Cries Merlin's voice from out the skies
You faced the hurricane, fought the storm
and now it's time to come on home
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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Re: The Battle
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by wizard on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 03:58:45 PM AEST
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victory!!
this was surely a victory for both author and character. a smile provoker this was.
i wait in anticipation for the finale.
wiz |
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Re: The Battle
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by bernard on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 12:43:39 AM AEST
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| This is going to be an epic. You Gwenevere have marvelous talent. These episodes should be sent to a newspaper or some other printer they are well worth printing. I take my hat off to you. bernard. |
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Re: The Battle
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 01:41:56 AM AEST
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A truly beautiful write interesting in own right
trancending days of old . . .
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Re: The Battle
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 09:23:35 PM AEST
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what can I say.. this has been a tale for the ages thus far Ros..
a most imaginative and descriptive tale of grandeur
and sublime.. this write
the 6th stanza is at the highest reverence to me..
I am remiss that it's come to end...as I'm off to read the final installment-
As Always..
B |
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Re: The Battle
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:59:41 AM AEST
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Tremendous write, as always. Emotions are always so caught up in your poems and there is never any chance of escaping. These are so deep to me... I love them...
Josi |
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Re: The Battle
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by candysears on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 05:13:23 PM AEST
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You are very talented..This is a brilliant write..Bravo!!!
God Bless! |
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