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The War Within
Contributed by
espeeayzee
on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 02:16:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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actions cover the mouth of truth
false judgement is received by sight
eyes aren't capable of hearing
yet believe the sight of manipulated space
actions fight the mouth of truth
battle cries leave reason to win the war
planets will align to conceive the awakening
gravity of lessons learned pull worlds together
blind men see the truth best
two eyes must close to open the third
focus and see past my jaded shell
find the reason for the war within
battle cries for planets to touch
action will speak the hidden truth
Copyright ©
espeeayzee
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2005-06-26 14:16:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The War Within
(User Rating: 1 ) by peaceinfear on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 08:52:12 PM AEST (User
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a little revising and minimal changes would make this an awesome poem--- its deep ... everyone needs deep sometimes Peace :) |
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