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loves issues
Contributed by
vampirelover
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Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 01:17:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i really wonder
what i was thinking
i truly feel like i
screwed us up
i really wonder
what was happening
now i feel as we're
talking so confused
like i was being used
by my own mind
taken over
but now i need to cry
please let me cry on your shoulder
u say its okay
yet i'm scared
and i wonder
if this is truly fair
i do, i don't
i don't know
anymore what
is going on
all i know
is i love you
and hope we stay strong
together, hopefully forever
what am i truly after
what's gooing on
am i being betrayed by my mind
why was i so blind
i just hope this won't hurt us
that we can talk it out
cause no matter what
i still and will always
love you
and that three letter word
won't change a thing
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vampirelover
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2005-06-26 13:17:36]
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Re: loves issues
(User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 01:30:45 PM AEST
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I think it's amazing..
your honesty simplicity
and subtle timing are the things
that make an artisan.. in all their glory
doesn't have to have perfect timing..
honesty and simplicity are best ..
5 blazing stars on this-
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Re: loves issues
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 14th March 2007 @ 12:50:47 PM AEST
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This was good. Honest and deep. I can relate to this with an ex. This was very well written with your emotions and feelings of love and need.
Take care
Christina-xo |
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