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you suceed where may have failed
Contributed by
little_genna
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Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 05:51:32 AM in AEST
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Depression of a child,
A soul that aches to be wild.
Time to grow into a woman,
To find my place beside my man.
Two lost souls,
Stumbled together and became whole.
Next to my side is where you stand,
There to always hold my hand.
My depression was a test,
That you suceeded in best.
It nearly broke you,
You survived. This must be true.
You declared your love first,
My reaction was not rehearsed.
Shocked, yet i feel the same,
My soul is now so very tame.
SJ
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Re: you suceed where may have failed
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 02:01:47 AM AEST
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what a gentle poem and yet well stated and
sincere, love at it's best lovely peice of
poetry . . .
Ben
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Re: you suceed where may have failed
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:38:42 AM AEST
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heartfelt words..
"Two lost souls,
Stumbled together and became whole."
great visual there..
great write-
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Re: you suceed where may have failed
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by Mangs on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 04:29:16 AM AEST
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no its not poor....nothing is....very good write,
love,
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Re: you suceed where may have failed
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by MissUnderstood on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 01:11:52 AM AEST
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| This sounds like a person that i know...great work! |
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Re: you suceed where may have failed
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by MissUnderstood on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 01:11:56 AM AEST
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| This sounds like a person that i know...great work! |
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Re: you suceed where may have failed
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by gmcse8 on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 12:42:45 PM AEST
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ok Tame Soul..........was reading this one and the one Are You Like The Rest. Seemed like companion pieces to me. Don't know if you intended that, but dates throw me off a little bit on that supposition. Read like companion pieces however, and when i look at them like that I like the Question/Answer feeling they evoke when I read them. One asks and the other answers, I like that, but again thrown off by posted dates, but don't really care I like reading them with Q and A in my mind, if I am totally wrong, be gentle. lol
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