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Life has no guarentees........so use what is now!
Contributed by
brew
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Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 10:04:17 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Soon there will be, a calmness in me
The time to go, to be wild and free
To sit on the edge, with wind in my hair
And look all around and not have a care
Closing the eyes, and thoughts of happiness
Makes me want to be , ever so spontaneous
To walk the sands, hand and hand
And know it was time, thats where began
To take all, that has been given
And put it back, and give it a rhythm
To have what, no one else does
By closing the eyes....will allow all above
So if you have time, go with the second
For leaving it now may cause for no pleasures
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Re: Life has no guarentees........so use what is now!
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by Rikki on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 10:33:21 PM AEST
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Good write and good advice.
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Re: Life has no guarentees........so use what is now!
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by bernard on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 06:37:29 AM AEST
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| I agree with you on this poem well done from bernard |
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Re: Life has no guarentees........so use what is now!
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by wizard on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 05:14:21 PM AEST
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great poem brew.
if we don't "go with the second" we will surely wish we did when it is too late.
wiz
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Re: Life has no guarentees........so use what is now!
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 02:33:41 PM AEST
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Sage advice...I like it. The first stanza was my favourite. The very last line of the poem stood out a bit though...Perhaps not the best wording...Enjoyable read nonetheless. Keep it up!!
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