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Awake
Contributed by
feathercut
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Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 08:12:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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the trains are empty rolling on
left our baggage in the carts
empty stations and a ciggerette
thinking of on what i bet
theres a morning hanging
that i dread
doorways become long hallways
how am i suppose to set
when i forgot just how to rise
fingers stuck in the gates of locked parks
and im a waste
no more stars to walk
we are
awake
and torn apart
dreaming, calling for the water to rise
holding the hand of a long goodbye
Im hoping you dont mess me up too bad
beautiful child of the peering dawn
you know our chances are
gone
And you guessed it all wrong
when it pulled you under
so there might be nothing left to discover
I hope you see our mirrored eyes
forever holding
our long goodbyes
Copyright ©
feathercut
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2005-06-25 20:12:47]
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Re: Awake
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by brew on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 08:21:51 PM AEST
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Deep........alot of inner emotions, feeling loney, yet with a one. Like in a dream, that you want to know where it starts, and then where ends.
Not bad.
Brew~ |
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Re: Awake
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by Rudy on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 08:48:27 PM AEST
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| i think that it's very deep and it really made me think, but umm... what is it a/b? |
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