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The Boy Grown
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 06:18:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The boy has grown so tall and strong
His childhood gone, it seems so long
Since he was here,a child, alone
Without a mother and a home
He stands beside a man of old
A magnificent man to behold
The horse stands by with silver mane
Waiting for the searching game
Goodbye my father,I love you so,
More than you will ever know
You save from from that village torn
And kept me safe and free from harm
You taught me how to live and learn
There for me at every turn
You taught me how to fight and win
Never to be destroyed again
But most of all, you taught me love
About the spirits, below, above
I must away to meet my foe
Onward, outward, I must go
To halt the wrongs and make them right
I know that I will have to fight
But I will be strong, brave and true
Yes, dear father, just like you
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gwenevere
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2005-06-25 18:18:36]
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Re: The Boy Grown
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by Shorty_88 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 06:43:35 PM AEST
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I love this poem. It was excellent. I am interested to know how long you have been writing for.
Pleasure to read your work
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Re: The Boy Grown
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by wizard on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 03:25:16 PM AEST
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that was great.
you write masterfully.
i look forward to reading the next 3.
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Re: The Boy Grown
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 08:12:16 PM AEST
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a most fitting installment-
vivid imagery..
love it
now I'm off to read the third-
B
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Re: The Boy Grown
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 11:13:00 AM AEST
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I love the ending. It is so heartfelt... I just love it. Great write...
Jodi |
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