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My Teddy
Contributed by
CarolinaBlue
on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 09:38:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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You do nothing all day
but stare straight ahead,
While you sit all alone
propped up on my bed.
So cute and cuddly
and soft to the touch.
Though you'll never realize
that I love you this much.
I wish that you could talk,
although I know that you cannot.
If only you could move
from your little lonely spot.
You're the one who keeps my secrets,
and my guardian at night.
No longer scared to go to sleep,
when mom turns off the light.
I always hope you'll be here,
many good times yet to share.
You're my best friend in the world.
My cuddly teddy bear.
Copyright ©
CarolinaBlue
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2005-06-25 09:38:25]
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Re: My Teddy
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by Shorty_88 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 06:51:02 PM AEST
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| Great Job. Your poem was really nice. keep up the good stuff |
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Re: My Teddy
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by jilted on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 09:07:10 PM AEST
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| This is nice. There is nothing more beautiful than the innocence of a child. |
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Re: My Teddy
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 05:25:04 AM AEST
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So refreshing to read such a lovely write..
it's so sweet and poignant,
stirring up many memories of my own childhood.
I adore this-
B |
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Re: My Teddy
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 02:59:45 PM AEST
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Awww I really this...You kept a great flow, and told a wonderful story! Nicely done.
Scorp. |
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Re: My Teddy
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by Dorkfish on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 11:16:36 AM AEST
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| That was so cute. I love this one! |
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Re: My Teddy
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 12:10:38 AM AEST
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Adorable write... brings me some great memories....
Jenni |
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Re: My Teddy
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by RoxyGirl on
Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 01:54:34 AM AEST
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I loved your poem it was so cute. And maybe its a good thing that your cuddly teddy can not talk because your secret will always be unknown to others no matter what.
LOVE ALWAYS YOUR FRIEND
ROXYGIRL |
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Re: My Teddy
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by Zandria on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 07:05:12 AM AEST
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| This was adorable! Very touching! |
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