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Love's Around The Corner
Contributed by
o7neves
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Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 04:06:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When you’re in love, what does it feel like?
Are you high in the sky, just like a kite?
Do you stand on legs, that are really too weak?
Do you get so tongue tied, you can’t even speak?
How do you know, if your partner feels the same?
Cuz if they don’t, then that’s just a shame
But if they do, how’s it shown?
Do they leave you, never alone?
How I feel, it’s still up in the air
But one thing I know, is that I really do care
And when I hear his voice, I can’t stop smiling
And when I’m with him, I feel like I’m flying
But physically, he’s not here
So naturally, I hold back tears
I try to have fun, I really do try
But I am not, so I’d rather die
I never thought, I’d want to be back in Queens
But I can’t show it, can’t cause any scenes
So all I do, is wait for his call
I know it’s inevitable, that I will fall
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Re: Love's Around The Corner
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by brew on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 08:29:14 PM AEST
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Aw....now thats a sweet ditty, for a loved one. Seems you are deeping."in Love". Liked the flow and great write.
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Re: Love's Around The Corner
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by animusutputo on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:04:56 PM AEST
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Aww.. what's so weird about wanting to be back in queeeens hUh?
So its 3 actually.. not 2 (not sure if ull get that)
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Re: Love's Around The Corner
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by CurtisC on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 10:05:01 PM AEST
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wow, i really liked this one tanya....you did a great job of describing your emotions..
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