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We Do Belong Together
Contributed by
o7neves
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Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 03:56:56 AM in AEST
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Who would’ve thought, from day one
That we would have, so much fun?!
I for one, just did not
But it turns out, you make me hot
But that is not, the only thing
It all had blossomed, in the Spring
We clicked well, and quite fast
But time will tell, if we will last
You took a part of me, that no one else has
Not even anyone, from my past
When you’re around, I feel so alive
So by my heart, I shall abide
I wonder how long, I can wait
But I know I’ll do, whatever it takes
While you’re out, fighting a war
I’ll try to have fun, and not be such a bore
This goes out, to you Fredy Dave
While you’re not here, I will behave!
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o7neves
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Re: We Do Belong Together
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 02:15:43 AM AEST
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What a sweet poem about love and devotion
lovely and true 2 heart if ever a feeling there
was . . .
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Re: We Do Belong Together
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by animusutputo on
Wednesday, 29th June 2005 @ 11:00:49 PM AEST
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Love always blossoms in the spring! lol like floowerrs hehe im kidding..
very nice.. and im sure ull behave =) |
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Re: We Do Belong Together
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by CurtisC on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 10:01:29 PM AEST
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well it's kinda hard for me to comment on this one since I know how this has worked out for you...as a poem though I thought it was wonderful, really heartfelt :)
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