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Fight Night
Contributed by
ABySs
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Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 02:34:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Tonight is a fight night
Its a fight with the inside
And those old memories
They're slowly winning out
As the demons rattle the chains
Now they shake the cage
Screaming with rage of being keep away
They're diein to get out
Soon the soul is crying out
From all the things its tried so hard
To forget about
Here they come now the demons
My sins the ones locked with in
Just wont stay down wont stay dead
And I know I'm one of the damned again
The way its always been
I give in again and let the demons in
The strength to fight has long senesce left my mind
My heart and my soul still say no but to the demons
Its just a sweet sound that will slowly die down
To a whisper just a crimson melody to the victor
Copyright ©
ABySs
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2005-06-25 02:34:22]
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Re: Fight Night
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by Zandria on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 06:43:29 AM AEST
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| interesting imagery! |
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Re: Fight Night
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 04:17:39 AM AEST
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This so much reminds me of what it's like when one fights within themselves, in other words depression. I can so much relate to what you've written. Each and everyday is a struggle. A very well penned piece of poetry that captures ones struggle within themselves.
*warm hugs*
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Re: Fight Night
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 06:23:16 PM AEST
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Great write. you can see the struggle.
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