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So Long and Good Night
Contributed by
sum1took_mine
on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 12:17:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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So long has this hollow spot
been here to haunt me,
taking me down. Everytime
I think it to be
alright, it's not.
It just won't be gone,
can't be lost,
this feeling shown
in all the stars.
They fall around
every tear seen so far.
I can't see you. I
see another. Lost.
Just can't focus,
I'm so lost.
It can't be lost, this
feeling of fear.
It won't be removed,
this feeling is here.
Burning on, it
just never dies.
Twisted and twirling
in all the lies.
Don't know how
long it will last.
I just need to
stop and rest.
Make it slow
down. I won't!
It's goin to fast. It's
making me choke.
I can't breath. Let
me run out
of breath. No.
Let me shout,
'I still love you. Always
have. I will fight.'
Not over. Sleep sound
and good night.
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sum1took_mine
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2005-06-25 00:17:26]
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Re: So Long and Good Night
(User Rating: 1 )
by Chubs on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 12:20:42 AM AEST
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| this was good. as i was reading it i feel as if i got into the flow of it. |
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Re: So Long and Good Night
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by beautiful_loser on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 03:23:29 AM AEST
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| nice poem...thanks for sharing |
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