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That Kiss
Contributed by
moon_light
on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 12:16:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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That kiss
so simple
so sweet.
made my
heart skip
a beet.
it swept
me off
my feet.
A worm
tingle goes
down my spine.
memorys flood
my mind.
strangth
i strugle
to find.
the fealing
lingers on
my cheek.
i blush
and tern
bright pink.
my mind
can not think.
i thought
i was
strong.
i gess
i was
wrong.
for thease
things my
heart longs.
that kiss
so simple
so sweet.
made my
heart skip
a beet.
it swept
me off
my feet.
Copyright ©
moon_light
... [
2005-06-25 00:16:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: That Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by Gigi_15 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 01:11:37 AM AEST (User
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I think this poem is very sweet and cute. It's a good write. I loved it, I can totally relate. Great job! |
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Re: That Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by thumper on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 02:01:19 AM AEST (User
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Awww, Jenny! (giggle, giggle) This one brings back memories! This has got to be the sweetest one yet! Making me blush, aw shucks! If I was diabetic, it would put me in a coma. lol Another sterling piece. Kudos!
Luv ya,
Thumps ; o) |
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Re: That Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by Doubtless_One on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 09:05:11 PM AEST (User
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ah to be in love how beautiful.
someone once said to love another person is to see the face of a god |
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Re: That Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 10:31:41 AM AEST (User
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hey hun this is a good one i have one ? is this about that day i kissed u well ttyl bye
DEMON |
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Re: That Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by Baby_Grl on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:08:29 AM AEST (User
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Awwwww Jenny! I know how you feel. Being in love. Hmmm its so nice to be with the guy you love to hold and to promise and to KISS so sweet. lol. I know how you so truely feel. So does every girl out there. (Theres a guy I like but hes dating that Stephanie girl but I'm kool now) lol. I love you sis. You always write kute poems. Keep it up.
Love Always And always love,
Baby_Grl ((((Amy Candelario)))) |
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Re: That Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 06:06:40 AM AEST (User
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Nice... I miss kisses and love. Your poem reminded me of how much I missed them.
Well done.
Take care.
David |
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Re: That Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by gah_veh on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 06:33:54 PM AEST (User
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hi keep up the good work and i mean GOOD work |
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Re: That Kiss
(User Rating: 1 ) by Devilish_Baby_Girl on
Monday, 11th December 2006 @ 11:45:14 PM AEST (User
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Ive always loved this poem... Always have and always will!!! lol, I most definitly know what its like to love someone deeply... well hey got skool in the morning talk to you when i see you love ya sis
Amy C |
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