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my death is yor fault

Contributed by jtkzlimz on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:45:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



52 cuts across my wrists a million times i tired to quit
im dying you know the cause of death is you
i might be the one to kill myself but your to blame
all those times you said i put you to shame
lucky you how should i die with a knife a rope an overdose
how should i commit suicide here you come up the stairs to save me it isnt fair
so you stop me from hanging myself but i overdosed too what are you to do
you saved me from that and are yelling at me but theres still one more thing
drip drop my hearts about to stop uh oh here i go i guesse you cant save me
the room is spinning i remember everything hes yelling i get hit my brother dies
now heres a memorie for you the one were you sat and watched me die
and the suicide note that says dont you cry you have no right because in a way
you killed me tonight




Copyright © jtkzlimz ... [ 2005-06-24 23:45:25]
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Re: my death is yor fault (User Rating: 1 )
by Chubs on Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 12:27:51 AM AEST
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this was really dark. i seriously hope you don't really feel this way


Re: my death is yor fault (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 01:19:49 AM AEST
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This is really something, alot of talent rolled up in there, this is a good write, very song like..great Job

~Clark


Re: my death is yor fault (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 08:46:33 AM AEST
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damn this is good... your words are brilliant and deserve more attention than your pain!!!!!!




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