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Inside and Out
Contributed by
JustAGirl001
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:45:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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On the inside I'm dying,
on the outside I'm crying.
On the inside I'm grieving,
on the outside I'm leaving.
On the inside I'm believing,
on the outside I'm bleeding.
Copyright ©
JustAGirl001
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2005-06-24 23:45:04]
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Re: Inside and Out
(User Rating: 1 )
by ABySs on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 01:41:53 AM AEST
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small world you live in it sounds like
i like the title but the poem is missin something
to me anyway |
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Re: Inside and Out
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by justme03 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 07:28:01 PM AEST
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i liek it but it does seem liek it is missing something
i think you need to add a little bit more to the poem to get your point across better
it was still enjoyable to read and i liked it tho
luv ya
~kortnie~ |
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