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THE PERSON IN ME
Contributed by
Shorty_88
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:13:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Tears of hurt and never ending pain
Unsatisfied feeling and hate
I wake up the same, day after day
Secludded and my health unsafe
I want to be what i never will be
And i hope to see someone i want to see
But the hardest thing in the world would be
Never accepting the person in me!
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Re: THE PERSON IN ME
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by ABySs on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 01:47:04 AM AEST
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been there i think everyone has at one time or another
nice write |
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Re: THE PERSON IN ME
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 11:09:15 PM AEST
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an ill fated perception.. this write
but I sense hope in the last two lines, if only in the word: "would"
had that word been: "is"..
I'd be offering condolences-
Great write.. hang in there
B
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Re: THE PERSON IN ME
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 05:23:56 AM AEST
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| That's the key, accepting the person within yourself and learning to love them.Life will take on a whole new meaning then.good Luck, Ros |
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Re: THE PERSON IN ME
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 05:23:56 AM AEST
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| That's the key, accepting the person within yourself and learning to love them.Life will take on a whole new meaning then.good Luck, Ros |
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