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The Glowing Butterflies
Contributed by
TenarIlithiya
on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:56:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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Slowly to and fro they fly,
Leaving trails of light as they pass me by,
Swirling colors everywhere,
Gently floating on the air.
Light and eerie pastels glow,
Over the gentle stream they flow,
They dance to the rhythm of the night,
And make wondrous patterns with their flight.
And in my mind,
These pictures stay,
As the glowing butterflies twirl away,
Saying goodbye with a colored wave.
As I stand here in the night,
Thinking of their glowing flight,
They danced away from the coming dawn,
For when it comes, they will hide,
All over the world far and wide.
With normal wings they will parade,
Until the dusk of each day fade,
And I will know what their mask hides,
For I can tell by the way they glide.
Copyright ©
TenarIlithiya
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2005-06-24 22:56:01]
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Re: The Glowing Butterflies
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by c2b6s on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:14:39 PM AEST
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| great imagery in this poem. This is one of the best poems i have seen written on this site |
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Re: The Glowing Butterflies
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by Shorty_88 on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:16:31 PM AEST
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wow i really liked your poem. it was very light hearted and i bet your friend loved it
Keep up the fantastic writing, Regards Tara |
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Re: The Glowing Butterflies
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 08:19:50 PM AEST
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A beautiful piece, lined with colorful words...
I look forward to more pieces :) |
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Re: The Glowing Butterflies
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by Gothchyk on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 10:27:50 PM AEST
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| a very creative piece of writing, the pictures brought to mind were beautiful, and the words choosen only enhanced it's beauty.great job. |
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Re: The Glowing Butterflies
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 03:53:40 PM AEST
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Very Nice . Really good flow .
Thank you for the write . Butterflies are my personal favorite. Thank you for sharing :-)
Whisper |
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