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Beyond Recall
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:20:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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When I close my eyes
something emerges..
an after thought
en route to an existence
of time frayed and forgotten..
a life betrayed.. wasted-
an instant of a tragic review
in detail.
The dread and doubt
of not knowing who I am..
and I am gone..
gone beyond recall
Light cannot reach so far-
How faultless the spangled city lies..
how bright the star lit sky..
how sweet the breeze
yet I know what under all the seeming beauty lies..
and the waves crash..
Treachery consumes me
and I'm lead to pass along the weary way
of all I've known..
where instinct swallows destiny
and buries free will.
I wade through the broken glass
of a mind that is not calm-
every nepenthean teardrop
leaves me stranded
in a sea of dillusion..
totally lost..
beyond all recall.
M.O.H.
Copyright ©
Man_On_High
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2005-06-24 22:20:43]
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by Shorty_88 on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:46:09 PM AEST
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Your poetry is brilliant. I definately look foward to reading more from you,
Regards, Tara
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:01:49 PM AEST
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Shards of a wasted existence stranding you in a lost world of disillusionment? The answer to a better life lies within you. Find it, Billy, find it.
Rita |
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by CarolinaBlue on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:21:22 PM AEST
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| your poetry is breathtaking and flawless! always a pleasure to read. ~Robyn |
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 12:25:19 AM AEST
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I agree with the breathe taking part .
awsome write. |
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by brew on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 08:41:44 PM AEST
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Seems we all have unanswered feelings inside. Alot have no answers.......but your sould can give you a aclue. Beautiful ; yet dark.
Nice post
Brew~ |
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 09:29:59 PM AEST
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very expressional piece!! i really liked it!!! and i, too, understand what it's like not knowing who i am!! it's quite sad and i know life is questioning, but we have to fight back and be strong. wishing you the best of luck!!
~sprints
p.s. keep up the good work! i enjoyed reading it!! |
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by wizard on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 11:37:52 AM AEST
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great poem man. it seems funny that sometimes we try to get lost, others we try to find our way back...but can't.
wiz
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by wizard on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 11:38:50 AM AEST
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great poem man. it seems funny that sometimes we try to get lost, others we try to find our way back...but can't.
wiz
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by DorianChambers on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 11:55:00 AM AEST
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A poetic journey of the mind and heart and soul, i envisioned you walking this road of many yesterdays, hot summery afternoons
in a gate of turmoil, yet you made it this far, beautiful triumph, and a great write . . .
Ben |
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 02:35:21 PM AEST
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| I can see the storm churning up the waves of disolusionment.What's needed is a river of calm, streaming in to calm the waters and bring a pool of hope |
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 07:31:04 PM AEST
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Wow my friend...this is despair at it's finest...The moment...the emotion...you caught it alright. Well done on a very tragic piece. Remember; light can reach anywhere you let it in....Take Care...
Scorp. |
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by harlot20 on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 10:43:01 PM AEST
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| this made me shiver with the beautiful trapedsgy to words |
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Re: Beyond Recall
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 06:42:55 PM AEST
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I am greatly at a loss, dearest. Not only for your suffering, but for all
(myself included), whose lives are magnified in times of overwhelming
emotion. When all they can formulate in way of thoughts are the negative
reminders of hopes and dreams, yet to be attained.
Your mastery with the written word is unsurpassed, love. And your
bravery to explore the deepest caverns of the soul and find yourself, is
admirable, and most humbling.
All my heart,
~Breezy
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