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Contributed by chantel on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

the clouds went by slowly.
he left without a sighn.
he buckeled up ,
straped in tight,
his car ran fast in the night.
he went so fast you couldn't tell,
who was that person behind the wheel?
his mind was gone,
he didn't understand.
he told himself lies,
his kids waited for him to call.
the night was full of cries.
they watched the life benieth them fall.
the task was almost finished.
people around them die.
they watched as the world deminished.
each day they tried to fly.
to where? Closer to him.
no one knew where he was hidding.
the only one to care was them.
he was out in denial riding.
no sign of him was around,
no voice, cloth , or tiretrack .
they don't wat to stop till he is found.
they don't want to admit that he will not come back.
He left without a sighn,
the clouds went by slowly.

Copyright © chantel ... [ 2003-01-07 17:00:00]
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Re: lost (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 09:56:35 AM AEST
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So sad for you my heart aches! This was another good write,Sorry I missed it! I hope there will soon be peace inside your heart! Christina

Re: lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 11:27:57 AM AEST
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very heart-touching, how sad though to think you may never see him again, I send my blessings to you for peace in your heart, remember you're never alone, there's a world of wonderful people

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