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Inscribed In Blood
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 08:10:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Inscribed In Blood
The pieces fall together, this struggling puzzle of life
The picture complete is better, then lonely shards of strife
The image so beautiful; centered and secure
The color so vivid, without a chance of fading or becoming impure
The veiw grasping for attention, the sight beaming with power
The ability to show feeling without mention, and giving love without the thorns of a rose flower
The touch of color creating the very essence of meaning
A red so bright, could only come from torn skin bleeding
The lost blood as the ink, and the black rose as the quill
The life as the sacrafice, for the show of love to be fulfilled
. . .
Written in blood, laid the words and the broken soul
"I died for love" - The story so easily told
Of another life - love stole
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ForeverAlone
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2005-06-24 20:10:18]
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Re: Inscribed In Blood
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 08:18:43 PM AEST
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| and how could you think that i might have a slim chance of not liking this. this is one of the first poems ive ever read where i actually saw an image in it, i saw a hand writing with a blackrose. your beginning i loved, your ending i cannot help but keep reading. well done, big bro, im proud of you. ::steals the piece for her own collection:: i might have to get you published instead of myself at this rate =] |
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Re: Inscribed In Blood
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by heartbroken4ever on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 08:33:36 PM AEST
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So beautiful. Just promise me u won't die for me i won't allow that. This is by far my favorite. I need my own copy love. Love You
Your Angel
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Re: Inscribed In Blood
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 09:00:34 PM AEST
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excellent piece... very expressional and emotional. i liked how you were able to show all of this happening and you used a good choice of words! keep up the good work! and i hope everything is all right for you!!
~sprints |
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Re: Inscribed In Blood
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 09:18:25 PM AEST
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your words become you:
"The image so beautiful; centered and secure"
wonderful..I loved it.
B |
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Re: Inscribed In Blood
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by Rikki on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 09:22:18 PM AEST
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This is so good! I love dark poetry
Rikki |
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Re: Inscribed In Blood
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 12:26:43 AM AEST
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wow beautiful and dark.
this part i like the most.
Written in blood, laid the words and the broken soul
"I died for love" - The story so easily told
Of another life - love stole
awsome |
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Re: Inscribed In Blood
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by Zeldianus on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 08:15:39 PM AEST
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| amazing write! loved it! great imagry!! |
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Re: Inscribed In Blood
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 27th June 2005 @ 08:48:09 PM AEST
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This is a " grab you by the throat" bit of writing my friend. Excellent images and the phrases were to be envied...may I borrow a few? lol
Very well done
Barkeep!
Larry |
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Re: Inscribed In Blood
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 10:00:34 PM AEST
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i agree, just BEAUTIFUL imagery!!!
very dark but magnificent.
i could relate to the sense of sadness in this poem. very moving.
well done clark |
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