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in my dreams
Contributed by
moon_light
on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 07:49:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In my dreams your smile lingers.
my hand entertwined with your fingers.
you by my side i can conker my fears.
when i'm sad you gently wipe away my tears.
When i hear your voice
i stop in my foot steps.
a beet my heart stops.
i reach towrds you with my
finger tips.
all i get is thin air.
my mind foold me.
you realy whern't thair.
in my dreams you'll always have a place.
when i wake you'll leave
without a trace
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moon_light
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2005-06-24 19:49:02]
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Re: in my dreams
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by thumper on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 01:52:42 AM AEST
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This was great! You really described the fleeting reality of dreams succinctly! Keep up the writes, because I believe you will be successful at it.
Your fan,
Thumps ; o) |
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Re: in my dreams
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 10:29:00 AM AEST
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hey jenn i love this one its really good but whos it about may i ask well ttyl bye bye
LOVE ALWAYS
DEMON |
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Re: in my dreams
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by Baby_Grl on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 12:03:28 AM AEST
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That really brought 2 tear drops to my eyes. I really liked this poem. Good one. very good I give it an A+++++++++++++ ect.... lol. Love you sis keep doing good.
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Re: in my dreams
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 06:12:39 AM AEST
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Maybe your drem will come true someday.
Take care, and always dream.
David |
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Re: in my dreams
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by gah_veh on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 06:36:53 PM AEST
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| well while im here ill coment im a fan of your poetry thats obvious your very good that guy musta been pretty lucky |
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