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Rage
Contributed by
carebear_06
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 06:43:57 PM in AEST
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a drunk man full of rage
his words are unclear
something is eating him from inside
wanting to know but with him
its like a guessing game
His rage is full blown now
he fights a brick wall
bash and bashing
his skull now busted
The brick wall has defeated him
he now lays in his blood
staring at the people above him
ashamed and embarssed
as the tears trickle down his face
the tears mix with his blood
now he lays in his rage
but he has set it free
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Re: Rage
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by KayeRains on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 08:20:56 PM AEST
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| Very nice but can one lie in their own rage when they've set it free? The by-product of the rage, I should think. |
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Re: Rage
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by Willofree on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:35:09 PM AEST
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Powerful poem, dealing with potent emotion. In terms of setting it free, i'm not sure whether it is because his tears and blood indicate he now feels the emotional pain; or did he die and thus was set free. Either way, a meaningful topic.
Well done
Will |
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