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Once beneath my time
Contributed by
feathercut
on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 06:38:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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hazel of eyes
shine bright against the neon lights
hard against my will
where could you sleep tonight
and dream as much
as here
rain freezing in the sky
forever sways slowly around us
your hands on your eyes
its cold, ill have them
with mine
dancing to the silence
too close for a wedding day
too breathless to recite vows
we hold eachother like our time
and see our whole life
unwind so fast were dizzy but were safe
safe in now
there is no honest
there are no lies
only tossed stars
promised to fall
not tonight
were too old to be crying
but time isnt present to hold our heads
we hold eachother
tears shake in the wind
and we end
just as we begin
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feathercut
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2005-06-24 18:38:58]
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Re: Once beneath my time
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by paula_kay23 on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 07:26:58 PM AEST
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very nice poetry, i love the ending it sums up the poem
paula xx |
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Re: Once beneath my time
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by KayeRains on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 08:24:21 PM AEST
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Very nice. Especially enjoyed
there is no honest
there are no lies
only tossed stars
promised to fall
not tonight
Kudos. |
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Re: Once beneath my time
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by britanna_rose on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 12:22:12 AM AEST
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| awesome poem...lots of emotion..i love it...especially the freezing rain part..awesomeness |
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