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The Small Boy
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 06:17:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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A little boy sits on the ground
Surveys the horror all around
His home destroyed, his family gone
A small sweet child left all alone
The massacre was short and swift
Then off they went, with nothing left
Nothing but this sweet small thing
All alone with just his sling
He slowly stands and wipes his tears
Grows so much older than his years
Oh yes, you soldiers you will pay
For I will be a man one day
I will learn to fight with sword
And with the help of knight and lord
I will search and they will die
Revenge will be my battle cry
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-06-24 18:17:38]
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Re: The Small Boy
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 08:48:16 PM AEST
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I absolutely love this Ros..
almost brought a tear to me eye.
I eagerly await the next installments..
B
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Re: The Small Boy
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by bernard on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 12:50:47 AM AEST
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| Rhyming excellent and the theme is great. much Kudos from bernard |
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Re: The Small Boy
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by wizard on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 03:30:32 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. i too, can't wait for the rest. |
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Re: The Small Boy
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by AmyLee4Ever on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 11:22:48 AM AEST
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Great write. It is pretty sad, but the others make up for it, and this is a great poem even when sad...
Jodi |
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Re: The Small Boy
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by freckle on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 07:21:14 PM AEST
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Another great poem. Short but still great descriptions.
Carol |
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Re: The Small Boy
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Friday, 4th May 2007 @ 09:42:52 AM AEST
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| OVER ALL GREAT JUST THE SWIFT AND LEFT GOT ME BUT I STILL LOVED IT |
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