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Hazel eyes

Contributed by seci on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 02:47:57 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

its so hard to open her eyes
she lost inside
beautiful young lady, but no pride
i watch and listen as others go by her way and put her down
she's quite different and because of that they force her roughfully to the ground
a feeling of insecurity she has
but feeling pretty for one day want last
how can someone put her down so damn low that it makes it hard for her to see
why do others make her life so much of a misery
bad as i want to help her , i pull back
i'm scared i'll hurt along with her and like a hard chemistry problem, it will be hard for me to solve that
if only she could read my mind and know somehow i want to give her my helping hand
but she may think i'm like the rest of them
she might think i want understand
she calling for help on earth
no ones listening, a penny to others is how she is worth
I'm praying for God to come by her way
but i've been praying now which it feels like a thousand days
she has no one shoulder to cry on at all
i wonder will she have anyone to catch her when she falls
she has no friends, so there for she walks with a crowd just for pretend
suffering badly with herself
thats why on june 1st she commited death
i could of helped and it felt like it was my fault all the way
but she was so low that i couldnt pick her up and i sit in greif as of this day
to others it was a surprise
not to i , because no one really cared or feel for the story behind those
hazel eyes

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Re: Hazel eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by jillian_phan on Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 03:43:37 PM AEST
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just showing you cared, was the only way you could have possibly helped, i like this write, it is similar to one i wrote, but yours is a little more on point, i like it though,

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