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On The Sea Shore
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:18:16 PM in AEST
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Curling me toes thru the sand
Feeling the lil grains tinkling me toes
Searching for sea shells
Lil ones and big ones,
In all colors and shapes
Hearing the sound of the waves
Rippling water noises
As I put me ear on the shell
I close me eyes and listen
Seeing the seagulls cruising over
Starting a long journey ahead
A distant boat on the horizon
Chasing the sunset that's disappearing
Into the water line far away
Everything seems so unimportant
When you just enjoying the day
Looking for seashells,
On the Sea Shore.....
~~Nats~~
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Re: On The Sea Shore
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 02:58:06 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. I simply love the ocean. Much peace. |
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Re: On The Sea Shore
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by MorningDove on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 07:26:58 PM AEST
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| i was asked by a colleague not long ago,"if you could live any part of your life over, what would it be?" I really did not have to think about it. It was my early childhood on the ranch with my Grands and parents. I had total freedom, total devotion, sunny barefoot days of nothing but the ranch and animals and clean air and going to bed at night to wak up to another wonderful day. Surprisingly he said most said they would want to relive their teen years again. There isn't enough gold in this world to get me to go back through that again, lol. Lovely write, Nats. Rita |
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Re: On The Sea Shore
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by Dralion on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:22:21 PM AEST
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What a wonderful poem for summer.
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Re: On The Sea Shore
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by mom11159 on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 10:18:50 AM AEST
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You have said what I feel so wonderfully Loved this poem in each and every word. So beautiful and captivating Your imagery so perfect to allow such a wonderful and clear pic I loved this Excellent job
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Re: On The Sea Shore
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:59:45 PM AEST
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Trying never to forget "the simple things in life", simply put this is a beautiful write from you. Such clear and briliant imagery, you brought us to the sea shore with you. Another awesome write, Nats.
Thank you for sharing, thank you for sharing that lovely day with you.
Tim
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Re: On The Sea Shore
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 06:37:58 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Your words remind me of the beaches in this area. I usually walk the boardwalk out here where i am. |
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