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I love you
Contributed by
TheKid
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 12:22:27 PM in AEST
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oops
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I love you without knowing how or even why
From the first day I met you until the day I die
This sparkling sensation will always be sparked
A feeling so wonderful even those afraid of love couldn’t deny
I love you unconditionally and all the modest details about you
Your soft tender kiss
The flow of your shining hair
Your kind gentle touch
I love you this way simply because I know no other way
The feeling of love so odd, that:
The smile on your face is my smile
The happiness you’re experiencing is my happiness
The sound of your heart beating is my heart
Copyright ©
TheKid
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2005-06-24 12:22:27]
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Re: I love you
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by bonster on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 12:47:02 PM AEST
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| Your poem is beautiful and heartfealt. What would a poet do without the agony and joy of LOVE |
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Re: I love you
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 07:51:58 PM AEST
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aww, that was beautiful. I really liked it
Keep writing!
-xo11ox-
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Re: I love you
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by KaylaK008 on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:46:08 PM AEST
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| that was so beautiful, you have a way of writing, that`s for sure!!! |
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