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Take A Peek
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:48:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What Is It That YOU Want?
MAN.........
What Is It That You Seek?
Well, Come On In Then
If YOU Must !
Come On In And
TAKE A PEEK!
Do You Like What You See?
Does It Scare You To Death???
I wish I Could Make It Pretty For You,
But....
It's Been Made
Such A Mess.
Laura Horner
6-24-05
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Re: Take A Peek
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by Sad-one on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 01:14:40 PM AEST
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| Just a little confusing at first, it took about 3 reads for me to understand, but now that I do, I know its a great write.I see the anger.KEEP WRITING! |
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Re: Take A Peek
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 02:44:15 PM AEST
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| Very strong!! and spoken with such venom! keep up the good writing. dw |
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Re: Take A Peek
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by Willofree on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 04:25:55 PM AEST
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A clever write regarding one's inner state....anger, as I see it.
Welcome back, Laura, I haven't seen you post for awhile. Too busy with your travels I suppose.
Good to see you back, me friend
Will |
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Re: Take A Peek
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 04:52:11 PM AEST
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this speaks 4 it self strong and intimidating
very well expressed . . .
Ben |
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Re: Take A Peek
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by n2dep2care on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 07:53:43 PM AEST
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Short, sweet... and to the point! Very nice!
Laurie |
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Re: Take A Peek
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 08:32:51 PM AEST
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I would love to take a peek.
Very well expressed. Got your
point across prefectly without
a million useless words |
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