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Wide Open Eyes
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 11:14:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Snow capped mountains
stark against clear blue sky.
Nothing but solitude reaches
these wide open eyes.
Ancient distant drums afar
earths pulsation felt deep.
Vibrating rhythms rise up
kissing these calloused bare feet.
You there in dank city air
might never feel it I fear.
Standing poised on your concrete streets
with cumbersome shoes you wear....
on your virgin white feet.
Laura Horner
6-24-05
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2005-06-24 11:14:35]
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Re: Wide Open Eyes
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 05:08:50 PM AEST
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An obersvation of iornies 4 each entity has it's
predjudice, then who's 2 say, welcome back
my sister laura . . . peace 2u . . .
in memory of woodstock 60 t's |
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Re: Wide Open Eyes
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 10:10:53 PM AEST
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| =] excellent of course. im glad that youve had inspiration of late. remember dont get too good or youll be a regular target for these plagerizers =] theres this song by staind, open your eyes, this poem reminded me of the song, because it talks about the world today. |
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