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Because of You
Contributed by
Sad-one
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:41:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I have to say, this is my most horrible write yet,
but maybe you could give me a few pointers.
I cannot enjoy my husband
I cannot hug my son
I can`t watch my daughter kiss her father
because of the things you have done.
i do not love myself
therefore i cannot love others
i can never hug and uncle
a male cousin or my brother
the image of a man is distorted in my mind
because of you it has changed
to grow back
it will take time
the comfort a man once gave
will never put me at ease
never again will i feel safe
because of what you did to me
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Sad-one
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2005-06-24 10:41:49]
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Re: Because of You
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 12:00:32 PM AEST
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| This one made me cry. Bravo to you for sharing such an intimate part of your being. My thoughts are with you sister. Take care and I wish you peace. Laura |
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Re: Because of You
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by DarkFairyLove on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:46:35 PM AEST
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| I have a deep understanding in my heart of the things you must feel. You are a wonderful writer and my thoughts and prayers are with you...Keep up the beautiful writing...Kayla |
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Re: Because of You
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by DarkFairyLove on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:46:40 PM AEST
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| I have a deep understanding in my heart of the things you must feel. You are a wonderful writer and my thoughts and prayers are with you...Keep up the beautiful writing...Kayla |
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Re: Because of You
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by DarkFairyLove on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 02:46:49 PM AEST
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| I have a deep understanding in my heart of the things you must feel. You are a wonderful writer and my thoughts and prayers are with you...Keep up the beautiful writing...Kayla |
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Re: Because of You
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by Shorty_88 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 01:50:27 PM AEST
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This was a very emotional write but yet written so well. I actually cried for you when i read this.
I cannot imagine the pain you must feel. Please know that you are never alone!
Warmest Regards
Tara |
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Re: Because of You
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by Shorty_88 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 01:51:55 PM AEST
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This was a very emotional write but yet written so well. I actually cried for you when i read this.
I cannot imagine the pain you must feel. Please know that you are never alone!
Warmest Regards
Tara |
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Re: Because of You
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by Shorty_88 on
Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 01:51:56 PM AEST
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This was a very emotional write but yet written so well. I actually cried for you when i read this.
I cannot imagine the pain you must feel. Please know that you are never alone!
Warmest Regards
Tara |
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