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Won Ate 100
Contributed by
shadowmaster_045
on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 03:40:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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And I’ve lost it all, I’m all to blame
In my mind she was everything
Nothing left, what can I say
Torn from my heart, stuck in my brain
I say nothings wrong, but I’m not okay
She’s moved on, I’m stuck in this place
Countless dreams killed by my fate
Hopeless smiles on my face
And I’ve lost it all, he’s all to blame
It’s all his fault, she was everything
And I lost it all, and I’m all alone
Call these numbers, but no one’s home
And I’ve died, but I’m not alone
We drove full speed with our cell phones
We called each other about ten times
The phone rang through to a busy line
I called again and turned on the news
What I heard I should have knew
Four car pile up survivors few
They said a list, your name went through
That next day, headlines we made
“Heartbroken Couple” on the front page
“Looking for each other, drunk in pain
Crashed their cars, died in vane.”
Their cell phones on, but the call was lost
Free minutes after seven
Too late to warn him
What could he say
Nothing at all
It could’ve meant everything
A collect phone call
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2005-06-24 03:40:56]
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Re: Won Ate 100
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by brew on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 09:59:00 AM AEST
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Wow........very very deep. Sad.
Brew~ |
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Re: Won Ate 100
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by sammydid on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 05:56:34 PM AEST
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| beautifully written, but crazy sad. |
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Re: Won Ate 100
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 04:11:19 AM AEST
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This just blew me away.
A very deep sad and heartfelt write. You have the reader captivated from start to finish. A sad and emotional write penned so well.
*warm heartfelt hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Won Ate 100
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by ilovelillbj on
Tuesday, 4th April 2006 @ 11:02:29 AM AEST
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such a well written n deeply felt poem..well done!
x Sarah x |
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