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Father
Contributed by
rosethorn100
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Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 03:26:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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I lead back to my childhood memories
Memorizing every serve moments
Of all the time, you view me bad
You would overlook your adjudgments
By flaring up your fury temper.
Out came your whipping and punching
Causing me bruises and wound
This may fade away in time
But my soul will never come around
Coz within me am concealing with scars.
Your never-ending caustic remarks
Drawing out my self-distrust
Making me feel wasted and worthless
Your harshness is like a knife thrust
I had to undergo your sternness.
Yet nowadays you still find me faults
For not being a love one
By withdrawing you away from me
After every thing you've done
To await this from me is futureless.
Copyright ©
rosethorn100
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2005-06-24 03:26:37]
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Re: Father
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by Arannon on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 10:15:00 AM AEST
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Nice. I like the descriptions. They are very...descriptive. :)
I hope you real relationship isn't that bad. |
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Re: Father
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Friday, 24th June 2005 @ 04:11:02 PM AEST
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Well told rosey, wounds will heal in time but the emotional bit about it never will. It will soften in time but never disappear.
Hope you will find a good balance soon with your father as a time will come where he gets older and be needing a daughter to look after him. Hopefully he will wake up soon n realise this.
You done well with this one.
Huggsssss girlie!
Nats. |
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Re: Father
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:37:53 AM AEST
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Stay strong...things will work out....
Hugs
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